Rosa Parks was an African American woman known as the women who wouldn't get up her seat to the white person, and this act let her become a hero in the U.S.A. However, the author of this article has a different point of this event. Rosa Park had been attended some civil right organizations before she refused to give her seat, it means that she didn't come out form no where and suddenly became a hero. But the public misunderstanding the whole story of Rosa Park, and shaped her as a hero. For the believe that hero born to be a hero, people then doubt that normal people can also be a hero, and they even doubt themselves can be a hero. It is important for us to know and learn how those successful people become a hero then have a misunderstanding of them. Because the misreading of hero tend to let us forget the other people who were still doing their best to change our society, and those people are trying to tell us normal people can also fight for their right. By attending a meeting to another, Rosa Park run for the freedom of black people, and overcome her fear to speak out loud. If she and her partners gave up, the Montgomery boycott might never com out. The real story of Rosa Park can inspired all of us, and let us know: By working together, do our best to change the world, and overcome our doubt, we can all change the history and become a hero.
Is Rosa Park a hero? Is the first came up to my mind after I read this article. It tell us that hero isn't come out nowhere, but all of are not come off no where. So why can they be a hero not us? “ordinary people produce extraordinary result” is the main ideal that the author wanted to tell us, but I have a different though about that. Although hero isn't come out no where, I believe some persons are born to be a hero, and Rosa Park is a person who made to be a hero. There are also lots of black people run for their civil right, some of them even have more experiences then Rosa Park, but they didn't become a hero. We all appreciate for their hard work, but no one become more famous them Rosa Park. I believe most of the black people took the bus at that time, and might have facing the same situation as Rosa Park did, but they didn't refuse to get up or they didn't make a big effect as Rosa did. It is Rosa Park who refuse to get up and made a huge change. Maybe Rosa Park was as normal as us, but at that moment she become a extraordinary person. In my opinion, Rosa Park is a hero, and she is the one who change the American's history. There is no wrong to call her “hero” because she has a extraordinary confidence, and she know what is her goal. Call Rosa Park hero won't let us give up our hard work; on the other hand, we will have a goal that we want to achieve and know how brave should a hero be. After all Rosa Park did a extraordinary thing so she is a extraordinary person.
After reading your response, I found something you need to avoid. First, I think your some ideas repeat many times, so I cannot catch your key ideas in the last. Second, some sentence ideas don't combine together. But except those mistakes, I agree with your response. Is Rosa Parks a real hero? How could she be a hero and how other people could not be? Let’s try to imagine that, if a hoodlum asks you give him money and you just are a common people, you must take your money out at once. Now you can see the little same situation, a white person asks Rosa Parks to give him seat, but she is not the same as every black people. Instead of immediately giving him seat, she rejects him. Rosa parks has courage to fight for racial discrimination and she do what other black people do not have courage to do while they also do not have times. Suddenly, she becomes a hero and then this story can prove that “Ordinary people produce extraordinary results.” Therefore, this story not only inspires black people to have brave to reject these unfair things, but also tells us that actually ordinary people have great power, and they can solve everything if you are willing to do. Therefore, don’t look down your ordinary.
回覆刪除When you write a summary, do not forget to write the reference of the article, such as the author and the publisher. After reading your summary and response, I would like to give you three suggestions. First, please divide the article into few paragraphs, and it would be clearer for your audience to catch your points. Second, I want to suggest that do write only the important part in the article and do not provide the details in it. Third, when you write a summary, you should only write what the author says instead of writing it as your opinion. Try to use “he says” or the author shows” as the beginning of your sentences.
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